The Night Of The Not-Snail

Was walking back from the pub, not too late at night. It was raining. My friend stopped, lifted his foot above a snail (ready to stomp on it) and said, “I hate snails,” and then stomped… Turns out it wasn’t a snail, but a small, silver locket.

We both froze. The sound it made under his boot wasnโ€™t the crack of a shell, but a metallic crunch. He looked down, puzzled, and nudged it with the toe of his shoe. I bent down and picked it up. The rain washed some of the mud off, and I could see a tiny engraving on the surfaceโ€”a rose and the initials โ€œE.M.โ€

โ€œBro… thatโ€™s not a snail,โ€ I said, wiping it off on my hoodie sleeve. He peered closer, squinting in the dim light.

โ€œWait… thatโ€™s a necklace or something?โ€ he asked, backing up.

โ€œYeah. And it looks old.โ€ I opened it. Inside was a faded black and white photoโ€”two kids, maybe 7 or 8 years old, smiling and holding hands. On the other side, there was a tiny piece of paper, folded carefully. I unfolded it, even though it was soggy and falling apart.

It read: โ€œCome find me at the place where the roses used to grow.โ€

โ€œDude,โ€ I said, looking around. โ€œThis feels like something from a movie.โ€

My friend, Reggie, laughed nervously. โ€œYou think someone planted that there? Like a treasure hunt or something?โ€

โ€œI donโ€™t know. But itโ€™s weird that you almost stomped on it saying you hate snails. Maybe karmaโ€™s real.โ€

We laughed, but something about the locket stayed with me. Reggie tossed his hood back up and said he was heading home, but I slipped the locket into my pocket. I couldnโ€™t stop thinking about the message: the place where the roses used to grow.

Next day, I brought it up to my Nan. Sheโ€™s lived in the area since she was a kid, and I figured maybe sheโ€™d know something.

When I showed her the locket, she went quiet for a second. Her fingers traced over the engraved rose, eyes softening.

โ€œI havenโ€™t seen this in years,โ€ she said, voice low. โ€œThis belonged to Eliza.โ€

โ€œEliza?โ€ I asked, leaning in.

โ€œEliza Mayfield. Sweetest girl youโ€™d ever meet. She used to live up by the old greenhouse, before it burned down.โ€

My heart jumped. โ€œGreenhouse? Is that where the roses used to grow?โ€

Nan nodded slowly. โ€œWhole garden full of them. Her father was a gardener. It was like walking into a paintingโ€”red, pink, white roses everywhere. But after the fire, they never rebuilt. People said it was cursed.โ€

That was enough for me. I waited until the next morning, then headed out to where the greenhouse used to be. I had to climb over a broken fence and push through some overgrowth, but eventually I found the old stone foundation, half-sunken into the dirt.

It was quiet. No sound but birds and wind. The kind of quiet that makes you feel like youโ€™re standing in the past.

I walked around, looking for any clueโ€”anything. Thatโ€™s when I noticed a stone bench, half-covered in moss. Something was scratched into it: โ€œE+M 1968โ€.

That matched the initials in the locket. E.M. It had to be her.

I sat down for a minute, unsure what to do next. Then I remembered the message: Come find me. But it wasnโ€™t signed. Was it a love letter? A message to a friend?

Suddenly, I heard a voice behind me.

โ€œDid you find it?โ€

I spun around, startled. An old woman stood a few feet away, wearing a long coat and holding a cane. Her eyes were kind, but sharpโ€”like they saw more than they let on.

โ€œSorry, I didnโ€™t mean to trespass,โ€ I said, standing up quickly.

She smiled. โ€œYouโ€™re not trespassing. Not if youโ€™re here for her.โ€

โ€œHer?โ€

She pointed at the bench. โ€œEliza. That locket belonged to her. And I think youโ€™re meant to return it.โ€

I reached into my pocket and held it out. โ€œDo you know where she is?โ€

The woman nodded. โ€œSheโ€™s at Willow Creek Care Home. She never stopped waiting for someone to bring it back.โ€

I didnโ€™t ask how she knew all this. Something told me I didnโ€™t need to. I just thanked her, turned around, and started walking.

Willow Creek was only a 15-minute bus ride away. I showed the locket to the nurse at the front desk, and her eyes widened.

โ€œGoodness… thatโ€™s Miss Mayfieldโ€™s! She talks about it sometimes.โ€

The nurse led me down a hallway and knocked gently on a door. โ€œEliza? You have a visitor.โ€

A quiet voice replied, โ€œCome in.โ€

Eliza was sitting by the window, looking out at the garden. Her white hair was pinned back neatly, and she wore a soft pink sweater.

โ€œHi,โ€ I said, stepping in.

She turned slowly and looked at me. At first, confusion. Then, surprise.

โ€œI think this is yours,โ€ I said, and held out the locket.

Her hands trembled slightly as she reached for it. When she opened it, she gasped softly. โ€œYou found it… after all these years.โ€

She looked up at me, tears in her eyes. โ€œWhere was it?โ€

I told her the story. About Reggie, the rain, and the almost-snail moment. Her laughter was light, like wind chimes.

โ€œI buried it when I was ten,โ€ she said. โ€œRight there in the rose garden. My best friend Martin and I… we made a pact. Said weโ€™d come back when we were older and find it together.โ€

โ€œDid he ever come back?โ€ I asked gently.

She shook her head. โ€œHe moved away a few months later. We lost touch. But every year on my birthday, I hoped.โ€

There was something about the way she said itโ€”soft, but heavy. Like sheโ€™d carried that hope for decades.

โ€œMaybe this is a sign,โ€ I said. โ€œMaybe itโ€™s not too late.โ€

She smiled sadly. โ€œWe were just kids. Probably both forgot.โ€

But I didnโ€™t believe that. Something about the way the locket showed up… it didnโ€™t feel like coincidence.

That night, I couldnโ€™t sleep. I kept thinking about Martin. Who was he? Where did he go?

Next morning, I went back to Nan. Showed her the photo and asked if she remembered a boy named Martin from that time.

She nodded. โ€œMartin Hales. Lived two houses down from the Mayfields. Quiet boy. His family moved to Wales in the seventies.โ€

I did some digging online. It took a few hours, but I finally found a Martin Hales in Llandrindod Wells, about four hours away.

I debated whether it was crazy to reach out. But something told me I had to. I wrote a letter, included a photo of the locket, and sent it.

Two weeks passed. Nothing.

Then one afternoon, a letter arrived. Handwritten, addressed to me.

Inside was a short note:

โ€œThank you. I never forgot about Eliza. Iโ€™d like to see her if sheโ€™ll have me. โ€“ Martinโ€

I took the letter to Eliza. Her hands trembled again as she read it, but this time she didnโ€™t cry. She just smiled.

โ€œHe remembered,โ€ she whispered.

Two days later, Martin arrived.

He was tall, with silver hair and kind eyes. When Eliza saw him, she laughed like a little girl.

โ€œI thought you forgot,โ€ she said, voice shaking.

โ€œNever,โ€ he replied, taking her hand.

They talked for hours. I sat outside, giving them space. Later, Eliza came out and thanked me.

โ€œYou didnโ€™t have to go through all this trouble,โ€ she said.

I smiled. โ€œMaybe I didnโ€™t. But someone had to step on the not-snail.โ€

She laughed again. โ€œYouโ€™re a strange young man. But Iโ€™m glad you did.โ€

From that day on, Martin visited her every week. They went for walks, shared tea, even planted a new rose bush together outside the care home.

And Reggie? Well, when I told him the story, he just blinked and said, โ€œMan… I really thought it was a snail.โ€

But a few weeks later, I caught him gently moving an actual snail off the sidewalk. I didnโ€™t say anything. Just smiled.

Funny how the smallest momentsโ€”ones you almost step overโ€”can turn into something huge. Lifeโ€™s like that sometimes. It surprises you when you least expect it.

The locket wasnโ€™t magic. But it brought something full circle. It reminded me that even lost things can find their way back. Even long-forgotten promises still echo in peopleโ€™s hearts.

And sometimes, all it takes is someone paying attention.

So next time youโ€™re walking in the rain, watch where you step. You never know what history you might be about to crushโ€ฆ or revive.

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